The War on Was

An editor once told me to reduce my reliance on ‘to be’ … I sweated over the task, finding it easier said than done. Year later … I find myself offering the same advice to my clients. Action moves our stories forward, so we need our verbs to be as vivid as possible.

Rather than leaving authors out in the cold, struggling to wage war on the beleaguered verb, here are some tips to manage this nit-picky challenge – when to use it and when to lose it. Continue reading The War on Was

Writing a Mystery: Chapter Titles/Playlist The Man in the Dam

In The Godfather of Dance, Jade Riley Mysteries Book 1, I used song titles to name each chapter. Reader feedback about this was positive, so I continue the style for A Killer Among Friends, Jade Riley Mysteries Book 2 … The Man in the Dam, Jade Riley Mysteries Book 3 completes the creative arts triple threat with a theatre focus, so I’ve continued the tradition. Continue reading Writing a Mystery: Chapter Titles/Playlist The Man in the Dam

The Winding Narrative Turns Eight

The Winding Narrative is now eight years old! This past year has been turbulent for me professionally, as my publisher, Wings ePress, closed down, so I had to find a new home for my books. Next Chapter Publishing came to the rescue, and they have now republished my first two Jade Riley Mysteries and, hot off the press, they have published the third: The Man in the Dam, Jade Riley Mysteries Book 3. I can’t believe I now have a triology! Continue reading The Winding Narrative Turns Eight

Interview about short story, The Value of a Sapphire

In 2025, Mirror World Publishing released Against All Odds, an anthology featuring seven short stories about love against the odds. My story, The Value of a Sapphire, is one of them. Check out this interview I did with Mirror World Publishing talking about my inspiration for the story and more. The original blog is no longer available. Continue reading Interview about short story, The Value of a Sapphire

Sarah Hawthorn on Love. Camera. Action.

In our last interview, Sarah and I discussed her writing genre change from her first book, psychological thriller, A Voice in the Night, to her second book, historical fiction, The Dilemma. And she’s done it again! Her third novel, Love. Camera. Action is a romantic comedy.
Today, we discuss her ability to shift genres, and the details of her latest release. Continue reading Sarah Hawthorn on Love. Camera. Action.